Teen Poetry #5 |
finding love |
SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
I was lost and crying... And so I rode, Into the blinding darkness of my mindLike a knight in search of truth. Holding my heart in hand, Ready to giveWith my soul open to the twisting universe. I searched for answers, amongst the dirt and stars _____ off the top me head !! *You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Not bad! Not bad at all. Some of the best poems can come seemingly out of nowhere. I think there's a typing error in there, correct me if I am wrong. Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done! From the top of yer head eh? Where else would a poem come from? Anyhow, I really enjoyed this piece! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is very impressive for being at the top of your head. Keep it up *appluads* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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