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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-08-26 04:43 PM


You read me like an open book, page by page
You opened my eyes to how true love is made
Showed me the gift of life.
You taught me right from my wrongs, yes you did
Always loved me tender so sensitive
Held me tight through the night.

A sealing kiss, from your eyes
Sparkles of love lights, the fire in my heart.
A sealing kiss, from your lips
Releases a wish, deep inside my heart.

Your smile is every where I look, all the time
I can’t seem to get your face out of my mind
But that is quite all right.
I call you up on the phone, through the night
I miss you so much  and I can’t deny
The way I feel ’bout you.

A sealing kiss, from your eyes
Sparkles of love lights, the fire in my heart.
A sealing kiss, from your lips
Releases a wish, deep inside my heart.

I swear that I will never,
Stop loving you.
And there, is where, I promise forever

A sealing kiss, from your eyes
Sparkles of love lights, the fire in my heart.
A sealing kiss, from your lips
Releases a wish, deep inside my heart.


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
SunShine913
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1 posted 2001-08-26 05:06 PM


this was a very good read for me .. keep up the good work!!

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
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between space and time
2 posted 2001-08-27 01:45 AM


A very nice picture of love...i liked it

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

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3 posted 2001-08-31 01:37 PM


I liked it, not your best, but still a good poem. Keep it up!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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