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Teen Poetry #5

Where is the noise?

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

0 posted 2001-08-24 03:08 AM

Where is the noise,
Where is the sound?

I wrote on this world's end, and now my
Own world's about to end and change now,
Be born anew, and turn to what.. I
Know not, but what's to be shall be not
Within my own control...

Where's the noise,
Where's the sound
So familiar
To my old self?

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

1 posted 2001-08-24 04:42 AM

Great begining and ending!

Nice work here!

ALLIE

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-08-25 05:04 AM

This was pretty nice frac. I miss seeing your work and it's a sure treat to see your name up on the boards. The poem was profound and very nicely written. It got me thinking a bit.... I enjoyed it. Quiero mas!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-08-25 01:06 PM

I havent seen you around here in awhile Frac. Where'd ya go? Maybe I missed ya b/c I havent been around as much as I used to. Anyway, this is a wonderful poem, like all the rest from you. Keep up the great work!

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-08-26 09:05 PM

all I have to say is:
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WHERE IS MY FRAC?

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