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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-08-23 11:15 PM


~I wrote this for my girl, she is so sweet to me~
               ~From Soul to Soul~

I can hardly express
My inner feelings
Your thoughtfulness
after all
I'm forever in your debt

For with just 1 minute
To show my Love for you
When you see my brown eyes
My soul is always true

Just to hold your hand
Giving me freedom to fly
never to land
But yet I would walk every mile
Just to be there and see your smile

Just to hug you
starting another fire
to brighten me anew

Just for your kiss
there'd be nothing else I'd miss
To have you and not be so cold
With your beauty to behold
And just one word to me from you
To Megan Brooke I am sold...

Love Always, "Your FluFfers"
   Garrett  

[This message has been edited by MoeRocko (edited 08-23-2001).]

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knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2001-08-24 03:12 AM


awwww ewoksters *sniff*
so darn sweetish  
and ooo u told ur name! *gasp*
*clap* ur movin on up hun
great job on ur poem and wonderful message ur sending my megzals. love ya
tiff

Allan Riverwood is a sexay man!

peachesNcream
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2 posted 2001-08-24 03:26 PM


Hey! This poem was really sweet! aww...I hope you're together 4eva! ~*~JeSsIcA~*~
Spice
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3 posted 2001-08-24 07:54 PM


Garrett you say? I've been hearing that name alot lately...It's beginning to really grow on me. ANYWAY- A SWEET poem, Showed a side to you I never knew existed. Megan is a very lucky girl to have someone think so highly of her, as you obviously do. Hope thinks stay this great between you, as I'm sure it will. "Fluffers." hehehe... cute.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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4 posted 2001-08-25 12:16 PM


I enjoyed this one a lot. I thought it was sweetly written.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

That girl Megz cant write
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5 posted 2001-08-25 02:11 PM


*smiles REALLY big*...Yes, Yes, I am VERY lucky...even though he makes me out to be a lot more than I reaLLy am :P....such sweEt words!!...haha, I don't know what to say...I wish I was as goOd with words as you are....haha, it's not fair!! :P.....*5 mins. later*...haha... Yeah.."awwww" is aLL I can think of... haha..soOo, I'LL go now...haha...*hugs*...Love you FluFfers :P..
**Meg**

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6 posted 2001-10-21 01:28 AM


I LOVED this POEM! the thoughts were expressed with truth and love. Nice read...

Tomorrow never knows what it doesn't know too soon.  -Noel Gallagher

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7 posted 2001-10-21 07:21 AM


awwww what a sweet loving poem.

Charisma

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8 posted 2001-10-21 11:49 AM


this is very sweet  
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9 posted 2001-10-21 06:14 PM


aaawww! Wish my significant other would write me something like that... That was so sweet *sniff*!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

never_a_princess
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10 posted 2001-10-21 07:34 PM


ahahaha look at all the SAPPY people!!! :P *argh-it* Shush you mushyness people! *erm* I mean uhh..haha..look what that one person wrote.."I never knew that side of you was in there" or w/e she said..LoL!! IT'S NOT A SIDE!! he's fake.. :P J/k!!! ReaLLy sweet poem, buddy! *liked it a lot* *winks at Megz* he's a keeper or w/e they say in like movies and..yeah i'm done now..and..the way you replied to your own stuff..*erm* I mean..haha..rock on!
__o0o_Anna_o0o__   *waves*
oh, and you know i HAFTA let this out: "Fluffers?!?!?" AHAHAHA *hysterical laughter* :P J/k lil kiddo! Settle! :P

[This message has been edited by never_a_princess (edited 10-21-2001).]

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11 posted 2001-10-22 10:53 AM


Awww so cute  

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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