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This my heart! (repost from teen #4)
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This my heart! (repost from teen #4) |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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This is my heart, being poured out to you. i tell you everything. except the fact...... well i think you know. i love you! you've been through thick and thin with me. you talked to me when no one else would. you made me feel loved. the only time you weren't there, was on the weekends that's only cus, you didn't talk on the weekends. those were the times i missed you. you may not think the same about me , but i had to let you know this. if i hadn't written this then i would be sad. i had to let it out! i had to tell you. this is my heart being poured out to you. i hope you know how much i care. for if we do meet i hope you will love me to! Robin i'm reposting this one because i want yall to read it. why you ask? because i submitted this poem to poetry.com and they sent me a letter saying that it is going to be put in one of there books! so i just thought i would repost this. i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 08-24-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Robin  this is so sweet I liked the open heart, and the smile I feel, reading this it's wonderful |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is really cute robin! it put a HUGE smile on my face too..  ....well done!Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
...oh ive been meaning to tell you this: i love seeng you there with your red bowling ball girly!  Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow....that was really good! Where was this poem when I needed inspiration to tell her how I felt? *thinks to self* It was right here you dolt! Sorry, I tend to yell at myself alot.......sad, I know. The poem, anyway, was really good. Thanx for the repost. Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
that's ok rich i do the same thing! robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well done on the poem. i enjoyed it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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