Like maths, the answer is there, you just have to work it out

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Teen Poetry #5

Like maths, the answer is there, you just have to work it out

samt
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 52
Brisbane

0 posted 2001-08-22 05:47 AM

People say to me
give up, it is too late
get her out of your mind
easier said that done my friends
for she is I truly feel
Meg is the one
I have not felt this way ever
so how can it be false
for my feelings are true
they never tell a lie
I sense we will be
like one an one is two
my heart simply says
she will come to you

SEA

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1 posted 2001-08-22 09:16 AM

awww, this is wonderful!

keoni
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2 posted 2001-08-22 03:33 PM

I like this one. Very sweet. I hope you get her.
Jon

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3 posted 2001-08-23 11:58 PM

Aww... VERY pretty, sam..

I enjoyed this one! Well written.

--Marie

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4 posted 2001-08-31 12:11 PM

I enjoyed this a lot. I think this was really sweet and I wish you the best of luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-08-31 01:51 AM

very cute...good one sam

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

Heavens Tears

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6 posted 2001-08-31 07:06 PM

This is good, but I think you should shorten the title. It would probably catch more eyes this way. Other than that, this was a great read!

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SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

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Italy but from NC

7 posted 2001-08-31 07:21 PM

awwwwww Sam very very sweet!! i liked this one .. but like i say keep writing and i will keep reading!!

P.s EMAIL me back please!!!

!~Andrea~!
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Delirious_Smurf
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8 posted 2001-08-31 10:26 PM

I thought this was great
Kinda made me sad... but it was cool

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

samt
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 52
Brisbane

9 posted 2001-09-02 10:35 PM

Thankyou all for your lovely comments.
I hope you all enjoyed my poem and feel free to look at my other poetry.

seeya round
Sambo

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