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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
I am locked up inside the pain is new it happened as if on cue...... If you are determined to stay out of my life stay out....but your words go through my heart like a knife You make wrong choices I can not change that but I can get you out of my life like squishing a nat! I do not know where you are for all I know you are at a bar..... I do not like you for what you did your stupid actions but I CAN MOT let you eat my heart away in fractions Despite all this (I love you) you are my biological mother but now I have an ok little brother I also have a loving stepmother whom I adore too! I will NEVER understand why you do the things you do....... ~Jezzika~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh my little one, I'm happy you wrote of your heart ache. get it all out. I'm proud of you. Welcome to Teen!  Some grown ups just never grow up. I'm always here for you and always will be. I love you ~Mom/SEA"I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
First and foremost... Welcome to Passions in Poetry! This a well written poem, and a very good first post. It's a very tough situation. I'm sorry you ever had to live with that. Things like that make me angry. Just be there for your brother I'm glad you decided to join us here at PIP. I hope you stay a while, and keep replying and sharing your work with us. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem I loved it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you like it here, we're a crazy bunch but you'll grow to love us. This is a good piece, its great to get the pain out through writing. I look forward to reading more so write and reply! ~Ali~ Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
your mum SEA??? wowsers! first off id like to give you a big:   WELCOME!!! to passions!!..i liked this first poem from you...i loved the content...its nice having sumone post a poem thats not about love and loves loss once in a while  i think you did very well here your emotions were portrayed well too i enjoyed reading it a lot..im looking forward to more from you!!...so post more soon! Outside Ab Simpsons N.Home: |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Mom~ Thank you for replying I always know you are there!! FA~ thank you for your nice reply I'm excited to be here Lauren~ thank you for your reply Ali~ thanks, I'm crazy too! with a mom like mine, I have to be  LOLCherish~ Thanks for that warm welcome! Wow, those smile faces are fun! I promise to read and reply as much as I can! ~da kaka be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
buh..its nuthing!..  ..its nice to see you around kaka!!!  Outside Ab Simpsons N.Home: |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
 Oh.. I didn't notice that you're Susan's kid! Wowsers!! That's pretty cool Hehe.. you're welcome, and again, WELCOME TO PIP!! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Yes, First off:  WELCOME TO PIP! Very nicely done first post. I enjoyed it bunches. Tough situation you described here. Your emotions and feelings came shining through. Hope to see much more posts AND replies from you very soon. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Welcome to Passions, Jezzie...your Mom told me you'd make a grand entrance, and indeed you did! I'll be watching for more! And by the way, you know what? Your step-mom is one lucky lady! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice first post. Welcome to passions. You're mom is SEA, now I'm scared. There goes the neighborhood.Just joking. Hope u like it here. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Spice~ Thank you for repling. I realy like it here so far!!! Lady In White~ My Mom said I would make a grand entrance, Well what did you expect! LoL Na really just kidding. Thank you for replying I try my best. Jon~ Still you had better look out!! Thanks for replying! Da KAKA be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was really great. I enjoyed this one. Welcome to PIP! It's great to see you here and sharing you work. I truly look forward to seeing you post your work in the future. Well done in this first post!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
*jaw drops* well thats a good way to leave somone speachless......great job Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow! Well first off i should say : WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! You definately were very clear on how you felt which is terrfic! I cant wait to read more from you...Keep em coming! |
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