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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-08-20 02:20 PM



pretend

I cover my ears
and close my eyes
the world stops
and yet
time flies

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

I hope y

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-08-20 09:42 PM


wow thats so cute!!..i liked this one..a nice little profound thought...awesome!!..keep sharing!

"Kiss my Starfish!
My chocolate Starfish punk!"
-'Hot dog'
Limp Bizket

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2 posted 2001-08-20 09:49 PM


pretend
not to feel this
that which is my heart's cry
believe there is a reason why
pretend



you've inspired a cinquian from me!
nicely done

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3 posted 2001-08-21 05:51 PM


Yay!  That was a very good write... and it inspired SEA!  Nicely done, as well, SEA.  Very well done the both of you!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

AngelPoet87
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Indy
4 posted 2001-08-21 11:33 PM


Haha nice jobs
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-08-21 11:46 PM


a big "wooo hooo!!" to booggie woogi mum!!

Outside Ab Simpsons N.Home:
'Thanks for not mentioning the outside world.'

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