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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-20 02:08 PM

I can taste the heat of his
lips on mine
smoldering
tongues entwine
~
I can feel his fingers
stroke my skin
Oh, baby
touch me again
~
I can smell the musk
of his cologne
If only I wasn’t lying
here all alone

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

I hope y

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-08-20 09:41 PM

ohhhh, another I like very much!! yes, I know this

excellent!!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-08-20 09:46 PM

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!...
this brought a smile to my face..oh my i raise my hand at being guilty of that!!

thanks for sharing!

"Kiss my Starfish!
My chocolate Starfish punk!"
-'Hot dog'
Limp Bizket

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-21 01:53 PM

I liked this one A LOT... the ending completely blew me away. Very nicely done! Keep posting all you work!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-08-21 05:00 PM

Another great poem I loved it!
Lauren

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-08-22 07:22 PM

AWESOME!!!! The ending was AWESOME!!!
This was short, but the impact was incredible! Such an unexpected turn at the end. Wow! I loved htis bunches upon bunches!!! You pulled me in and then smacked me. haHaHa... MORE!!!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-26 02:59 AM

Pretty nice poem. Made me think about something...anyway...I enjoyed it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

7 posted 2001-08-26 05:13 AM

ohhh! thats the worst, being alones a killer!

Dont worry theres light at the end of the tunnel *lol* i promise!

Good write though, liked the twist at the end!

G'Work

ALLIE

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