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0 posted 2001-08-20 02:06 PM



Let the past fade away tonight
Like a star fallen from the sky
Let’s give in to the desire we feel
No more fear to stand between you and I

An ache that has built up for some time
A hunger that has pained too long
No, I don’t believe I could turn away
I know that I am not that strong

Touch my face, feel my words
Wipe away the memories with the tears
You taunt me with your mere presence
A passion that doesn’t fade with the years


Lust finally took hold of logic
As it had so long ago
The kiss that had cast the spell
Revealed the destined, mirrored soul.

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

I hope y

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-20 09:31 PM


wow, very very cool! I like this one a lot  
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swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2001-08-20 09:52 PM


The kiss that had cast the spell
                         Revealed the destined, mirrored soul.

hmmmm...i liked this one bunches A!..especially that list line ...thanks for sharing!

"Kiss my Starfish!
My chocolate Starfish punk!"
-'Hot dog'
Limp Bizket

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3 posted 2001-08-21 05:59 PM


"You taunt me with your mere presence
A passion that doesn’t fade with the years"
I really liked this one... your descriptions are very well done.  Nice work!  I look forward to seeing more from you soon.

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

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