Teen Poetry #5 |
I never......., I know........ |
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I never..... thought I would sit here for hours and cry. Because I never actually thought I would have to say goodbye. I never..... thought I would lose such a good friend. And now I have to wait for my heart to mend. I never..... actually belived you were going off to college. Even though I knew you had to further your knowledge. I know..... if it wasn't for you I wouldn't be alive. But because of you I now know I really don't want to die. I know..... you always got on my case when I did something bad. And I know you were one of very few good friends I had. I know..... someday soon I'll see you again. Beause I know for a fact it's in god's plan! Lauren I wrote this because my good friend Crystal left for college today and I'm having trouble dealing with it. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i know how that is. but i will be leaving for college next year so it's ok. great poem i liked it a lot robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Sure is hard losing friends, best of luck good poem ALLIE |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Well I can understand the pain of the situation. But just remember its not forever. Good luck to Crystal and to you too. Take care. ~Ali~ Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's always tough when someone so close to you leaves. I remember when my brother left... and when my sister left. Very hard. You'll get through Eventually, you'll have an easier time dealing with it. Very nice write. It's awesome that you're getting your feelings out through writing. The emotions were strong. Nicely done! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so sorry to hear that you and ur friend had a temporary leave from eachother...a lot of my friends are going back to college in a few days and its kinda hard to deal with it....::hugs:: Great poem tho...u expressed ur feelings well hun |
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