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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-19 11:04 PM

Long flowing brown hair,
All the love that we share.
Prettiest brown eyes,
Never tell any lies.
Most gorgeous smile,
Waiting to see it all the while.
Sweetest tasting kiss,
Already I do miss.
Softest lips,
Makes my mind do little flips.
The most gentle touch,
I like it very much.
Sweetest personality,
I'm glad this is reality.
This is my happiness,
YOU are my happiness.
ok call me a softie or whatever but i wrote this right after my girlfriend left cuz, well hell its not the same without her so i gotta do somthin to make it seem like shes still here physically

Only darkness falls on those without souls

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-08-19 11:11 PM

Its good to hear a sweet poem among all of the recently depressing ones. Too bad it was written under those circumstances, but you will be fine, I'm sure of it. Take care and keep writing always.

~ali~

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel.

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-19 11:19 PM

i guess it was a good kinda leaving because you seem to be on nice terms with it. Oh well, we (the readers) seem to benefit from a great read nonetheless

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-08-20 03:13 AM

Your poem is really sweet and I love it keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-21 01:24 PM

aww.. this is sweet! I see you writing in a-a-b-b form a lot. Have you ever tried something different? Experimenting is always a good thing

Nice work, I really enjoyed this..

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-08-22 06:58 PM

Very sweet. I liked it bunches.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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