First and foremost, Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Secondly, the poem was beautiful.
"I awaken from my reverie,
to seek whatever else may be.
I see memories of laughter long since faded,
and seek the innocence that has abated."
I really liked that stanza. Very well done. Rich. I'm going to really like you! Your rhyme scheme was well done, and the flow, although broken in places, is overall okay Nice work! I can't wait to read more posts and replies from you
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