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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
my distance from the one i love my only love in the world more than meaning it self the feeling behind every emotion, infinite.. neglecting logics and reasson for the things with no meaning.. opening up doors to my heart opening doors to vulnerabilitys hurts befor, stonger now! i live out side beside my thougths my love i hold.. and keep thru every night.. even on the days when things don't seem that tight i'll get by.. and ever better learn to evolve to a knew consciousness of well being, loving everything.. as we seis it in time...... |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, great poem. I think this is the first of yours I've read... oops. "even on the days when things don't seem that tight i'll get by.." Great lines  Bel |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
great poem! You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very good message, Ryun. I enjoyed this one.. Not your best, but still a good write. I liked the ideas you portrayed here. Good work. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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