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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-08-17 04:55 PM

Saw your face, in my tear drops
Broke down, cried, cause that were just to much.
memories, are killing me
all this pain, is in the way can't breathe.

How could i ever let love slip away
let it out, between these two hands of mine.
Now I finally know just what to say
if only I could turn back the hands of time.

I miss you mre than you can imagine
i just want you in my arms again,
Bacj here were you belong this time
can't last another lonely night,
Without you, without you.

held your hand, in a lost dream
heart broken, telling you how i feel.
Remember, the times we shared
the nights when, you whispered in my ear.

How could i ever let love slip away
let it out, between these two hands of mine.
Now I finally know just what to say
if only I could turn back the hands of time.

I miss you mre than you can imagine
i just want you in my arms again,
Bacj here were you belong this time
can't last another lonely night,
Without you, without you.

Still picture you,
whenever I'm alone, i sit and cry.
Love you so true,
But still I lay, and wonder why,
Why, I just stood and watched you
close the door and leave.

I miss you mre than you can imagine
i just want you in my arms again,
Bacj here were you belong this time
can't last another lonely night,
Without you, without you.

Without you...

ryun
Junior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

1 posted 2001-08-17 05:05 PM

i feel ya...
...man i feel ya.

turning back the hands of time
would be meaningless
for we wouldn't know what we had to find
we learn and live
and also try and be so kind
but for me shyness is my undermind
i couldn't find the words at the time
but now, overwelmed with, thoughts and emotions.. we only wish we had another try..
i do, yet kept from fear
lost in the night
learning and loving
my love that fades with the night..

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

2 posted 2001-08-17 06:46 PM

This was a beautiful poem, I am totally with you on this one, I am still with my first love and I honestly cannot describe what my life would be like without him, I hope you are OK! Love is a brilliant thing so cherish it and whenever it disappears ... run after it!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

3 posted 2001-08-17 06:55 PM

first loves are the best, good piece of work here

Only darkness falls on those without souls

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-08-17 08:23 PM

gosh i know a lot of guys that feel this way.....well the poem was great i hope to see more soon!

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-20 11:12 PM

First loves are the best. Unfortunately, precious few last.
I understand what you're talking about here, Hallu. Very hard... I hope all is Okay now. I enjoyed this. Nicely done!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

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