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fearing-laughter
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0 posted 2002-04-04 12:09 PM



a heart so pure
a love so true
my soul was incomplete
until i knew you

-bergundy-


maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

[This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (04-06-2002 02:58 AM).]

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-04-05 12:37 PM



fearing-laughter-
Oh...I really like this!
Love the happy feeling it brings, with just
a few, carefully chosen, words.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2002-04-10 11:51 AM


This was so cute. Short and sweet and so adorible. I liked this a lot!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

PurplePeopleEater
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3 posted 2002-04-11 11:38 PM


yay bergy wee wee! i love you lol. it was pretty. happy happy day.

-Dani-

punkrockerrobin
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4 posted 2002-04-13 04:09 PM


great poem tks for sharing!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Dark Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-04-13 11:20 PM


That just said it all.. it's kind of funny how one person has the power to bring everything together... to fill the voids. I liked this one. Thanks for posting.

Think about it.

Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2002-04-14 10:08 PM


Yes.
I agree with DE...one person so capable of filling voids.

Unbearably also able to create them.
Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

twitchy
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since 2002-05-29
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7 posted 2002-06-03 01:15 AM


who be this m? hehe..oh well..look at the icon!!!!!
m

Sanity now and beyond me
I will always love you.
However long I stay
I will always love you.
Whatever words I say
I will always love you

blakloks
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8 posted 2002-06-03 01:34 PM


great poem! with juz a few succint words u made my day. happiness can be contagious
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