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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-08-14 11:20 PM


Love

Matt if you only knew how much I love you
When you hold me so tight in your arms
You make me think about you and I

You tell me you love me from your heart
And when I look into your eyes I get lost
Then I look deeper and you make my world so joyful

As we looked into the lake I saw my dads face
I knew he was happy
Because I found you

The first kiss made me so happy
I wished that I could stayed with you
But we went home

But I love you to death
Your voice makes me melt
Your body makes me feel small

Love,
Min
August 14, 2001


Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
silvrduck
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since 2000-11-05
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1 posted 2001-08-15 02:02 AM


Beautiful, sweet poem. I love it..
You're lucky, you sound so much in love.. good luck with this Matt  
~Sarah

Ski*Chick
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2 posted 2001-08-15 09:16 AM


He knows I love him, he's so sweet. I mean you have to love someone whos that nice to you.   Min  

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

Ina
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3 posted 2001-08-15 12:23 PM


great work Minna. You seem happy.   so i hope this works out.

Regina

keoni
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4 posted 2001-08-15 12:45 PM


This is very sweet. You seem extremely happy, hope things stay that way!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
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5 posted 2001-08-15 10:40 PM


*Sigh*  So sweet, so filled with love....I'm jealous. HeHeHe.
Very nice write.  

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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6 posted 2001-08-20 12:24 PM


Aww.. Jesa... I love you!  Hehe.. This is a beautiful poem, Minna.  I'm SO glad that you're happy with him.  It sounds like you've found a great guy!  Wonderful work, here.  

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

TopGunLauren
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7 posted 2001-08-20 03:07 AM


Awsome poem it is really sweet keep up the great work!
  Lauren

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8 posted 2001-09-19 05:21 PM


very sweet poem Minna
try sharing this poem to this special someone
thanks for the read
keep it up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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