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XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

0 posted 2001-08-14 09:18 PM

The pain runs deep
The pain of rejection
To love one
But not to be loved back
That pain sticks with you
To look them in the face
and not to see anything back
That pain hurts
To live your life
Knowing you weren’t good enough
That is pain
I live knowing this pain
As a friend

(ah my poems short and sweet...not....oh well...I just wanted to write down what I feel like right now)

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-08-14 09:28 PM

Wow, this poem makes it sound so simple. Simple, but true. I really really liked it. Thanks for the read

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

2 posted 2001-08-14 09:45 PM

Heya Pat!

Ok, about the poem:
Nice...short...hit the spot pat. That's the good thing about your poems. You really know how to keep the reader focused on what you are saying.

The ending really hit home though. I felt like that at one time, and I can relate to what you're feeling now, but in some ways, we all feel different about the same kinds of things.

I hope you feel better soon Pat. There's nothing worse than having a friend feel down...Until next time, Pat.

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

3 posted 2001-08-14 10:27 PM

emotionally spoken very nice

Only darkness falls on those without souls

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-08-15 10:29 PM

Very nicely done. So raw, So Blunt. I liked that.
"To live your life
Knowing you weren’t good enough"
Those lines hit home. I know how ya feel, Deary. Sucky situation...Sorry....BUT! It made for a freat write.

(If thats at all any cancellation.)

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2001-08-17 10:50 PM

I feel exactly the same. A girl I REALLY love has no real feelings for me and that DOES hurt, so I understand.... all too well.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

6 posted 2001-08-18 06:40 PM

yeah it hurts a lot when you love someone so much and they dont love you back

I hope you meet someone that will love you just as much as you love them

it was a great poem...i cant wait to see more

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-21 10:35 AM

"To love one
But not to be loved back
That pain sticks with you
To look them in the face
and not to see anything back
That pain hurts"
Those lines hit home for me more than any other. Ouch..

That does hurt. Hurts VERY bad. *sigh* Anyways, I really like this poem. I think many people can relate to these words. Nicely done. I haven't seen you around here much, so I hope I see more soon!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

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