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finding that peace is hard to find
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finding that peace is hard to find |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Is there some place where no fear is present? Is there a place that is beyond plesant? Is there a place with no judging voices? Is there a place,where noone laughs at my choices? Is there a place where there is no lies? Is there a place where noone crys? I need to find that place so dear I need to find it, I hope it's near I need some peace,away from everything I need a place,I need a sense of belonging I need that friend who is always there I need this life to stop being so bare I feel like Im going insane being here I feel like im drownding in my fear I need to find that place so dear I need to find it, I hope it's near I don't need a sould to doubt Iam tired of not being heard, even if i shout Iam tired of being that voice that isnt reconized Iam tired of games,and selfish lies Stop doubting,stop lieing,stop judging stop it now I dont know how I make it? I dont know how? Someone bring me to a point of peace and quiet My life is ongoing loud,like a riot Will this pain stop hurting so? I just want to go, I just don't know So many things,so little i can handle I dont know how Stop your lies stop my tears stop it all now Much more pain keeps pouring on the pain doesnt go away it isnt gone I need to find myself again,Im lost,Im hepless I need to get myself away from this mess I need to find that peace of mind I need you to please be kind Finding that peace, is hard to find |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
That was very good. I'm sorry you are feeling this way. I do at times to. The sucky thing is, those people will never go away, you just have to learn to live with them or blow them off.Keep up the good work! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Is there some place where no fear is present? Is there a place that is beyond plesant? Is there a place with no judging voices? Is there a place,where noone laughs at my choices?" If you ever find such a place, be sure to tell me. Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Very nicely done. Your feelings came shining through. Hope all gets better.  I loiked these lines: "Iam tired of being that voice that isnt reconized Iam tired of games,and selfish lies" And I really clicked with these ones: "Someone bring me to a point of peace and quiet My life is ongoing loud,like a riot" Thansk for the read. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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