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California Rockstar
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since 2001-08-09
Posts 13
State of Confusion

0 posted 2001-08-14 12:03 PM




In Regard to Sylvia
I remember when there weren't enough empty pages--
Times when it seemed there wasn't enough paper in the world.
My room sat scattered with ideas in bloom, and fragmented thoughts.
Perhaps it has passed away,
and my will and want to give birth to something amazing has died.

The abundance of pages now sit on the shelf taunting me,
like frozen embryos waiting for a chance to thaw.

© Copyright 2001 Ann Shotwell - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
1 posted 2001-08-14 02:27 PM


This one is great. the whole thing was good. The last two lines were the best. Keep it up.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

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