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Someone I'm not
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Someone I'm not |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Striving to be someone that I'm not I said no more, atleast that's what I thought I'm doing this once more Becoming that someone, I was before Stoped eating for a while,stoped thinking about me You say,"your skiny!!" why dont you just see??? I look in my reflection in the mirror My life is emptiy,in my soul it's bare Not skiny enough, so I stop dont eat This is a struggle I cannot beat My self image,is nothing, nothing there I look at my self,I continue to stare droped almost 10 pounds,its still not enough Im going down that road again,its all so rough Emptiy is my stomach,emptiy it will remain So much hurt is there,along with the pain Why am I doing this,1 question is why? I feel like iam waving my life goodbye Noone understands nore can they comprehend When will this insanity begin to end? it would help to have a friend,just one is all I ask Instead of all the fake ones, who hold a mask It would be nice to fix everything But then you relize, your living in a dream you tell me, "you look sick is anything wrong?" I smile and say,"No iam okay! just fine!" The truth is I'm not, I feel like I just dont belong Perfection is what I strive for but it cant be done If feel like Im alone,Im the only one Not happy with myself, not happy with me you dont care, you live your life, and turn your face to reality |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
P.s. Sorry for the spelling errors...Iam not that good at punctuation,...Im not perfect!!  |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
i like the piece! but if this is really you, you do need some help...*hugz* "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I like this poem. I hope you can figure things out because that is very dangerous to do to yourself. To hell with fitting in if that's what it takes.Good luck Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. there is a lot of emotion packed into this. I'm sorry you're going through this. You don't deserve it *hug* As for the spelling errors... there's an edit button right above your text that you can go back and edit errors like that if you like As for the situation... *hug* Stay strong. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
I really liked this. It's nice. The spelling errors are not that bad (you should see mine..) Keep writing! And I hope you'll be okay. I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Very few spelling errors- that I saw atleast. A horrible situation you are describing though. E-mail me if ya wanna talk. I'm always happy to give advice. HaHa. But seriously, You should talk to someone ( that is , if it's about you.) Not eating is horrible. ( I don't see how people do that...food is my friend. LOL) *Hugs* Stay strong, deary. Best wishes to ya. You did very well here. I enjoyed it. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one. Quite the emotional piece here. I liked it and hope things do get better for you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i understand the whole ' being something you're not' deal. i've done it...and beat it. It's ok to be what you are cuz when you're you then you'll make friends that'll stick by you...it's when you're something you're not that your 'friends' wear masks. Niccolo Machiavelli said, " I'd rather be hated for what i am, then be loved for something i'm not" sorry...didn't mean to preach...but it's a bad personality trait... i get it from my dad...he does that whole preaching thing a lot...guess it's rubbin off...well written poem tho, very deep meaning. Email me ur sumthin if u need to talk(if the poem's about you)" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You summed up about 1000 emotions into one poem Hope things do go well for you You have to realize that you health should come first Thanks for sharing, keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Lisa, the first step is admitting that there is something wrong. You have done that. Now what you need to do is find the courage to seek that help. Every human being is beautiful no matter what they look like. I'm sure you're a beautiful person with gorgeous features. Keep positive, stay strong and find people that will help. If you need to talk, my email is: shadowchaser46@hotmail.com As for your piece, it's very emotional and I could really feel what you're going through. take care. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
WE ALL LOVE YOU!!!!! WHO CARES ABOUT THE LOOSERS AT SCHOOL? You can have us! Then you can eat all the chocolate you want! |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Great poem, since im knew here i don't really know what other things you've done. But i think its exceletly written. When it comes to fitting in, the best meathod is to not care. Act yourself entirely- sure you might scare some people, and people might say your odd, but isn't that better then carrying such a facade? It is much better to live in a word of reality as yourself, then to live in a world of disbliefe as someone else. Great poem, keep up the good writings Your not the only person who goes through the things, we all do, perhaps in different ways, but im sure people can realte. -Nathan |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
The piece is wonderful yet i wonder why if it is you who your talking about it is doing this to yourself. It will only bring you more pain take and advice be happy with yourself if your not first of all then nobody else will. Also think of what it might do to you and your family in the long run just sit down a minute think of what harm might come WE LUV U |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
this makes me cry. so beautiful!! great job... i'm sure most of us can relate to this... i know i can *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I've faced this same struggle before..its rough and hard and you definately need some help coping w/this b/c as you know its much to difficult to do on your own. ::hugs:: It was a beautiful piece..extremely touching! |
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