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slickpnkgal
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0 posted 2001-08-12 03:21 PM



They come in all different,
sizes and kinds,
they are so comfy,
I wear 'em all the time.
Converse All-Stars,
they're totally great,
Converse All-Stars,
are really first rate.
No one's too old,
or even too young,
they're hip and they're comfy,
and don't cost a ton.
Converse All-Stars,
my most favorite type of shoe,
Converse All-Stars,
are good for the health too.
Okay so I'm done,
since I probably sound crazy you see,
but Converse All-Stars,
are the ones for me.

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1 posted 2001-08-12 04:27 PM


Hmmm, that was interesting.  I've never read a poem about shoes before. Well, keep writing!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

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2 posted 2001-08-12 09:47 PM


Interesting poem it's cool I like it.Keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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3 posted 2001-08-12 11:29 PM


*CLAPPING* HOORAY! Someone who shares my love of all-stars...though-- i've all called them Chuck's....no matter... i thought the poem was very cute and i can definately connect with it. Happy writing.
slickpnkgal
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4 posted 2001-08-13 09:14 AM


woah! YOUR MOM ok ali had to do it! i didn't know that you could be this talented hahaha.ok peoples that read this reply ali is werid beware! haha dude ali great job on the poem!
robin
ps. have fun in cali see ya when ya get back.


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5 posted 2001-08-14 03:13 PM


LOL!  This was a fun one   I enjoyed this... gave me a laugh, hehe.  Well, I'm glad you enjoy converse all-stars.  They're a good type of shoe, I must admit.   Thanks for sharing this bit of info with us  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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6 posted 2001-08-25 04:50 AM


I really found this to be clever. Extremely well done. The poem was a very fun read.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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7 posted 2001-08-25 01:09 PM


Cute poem.  Nice tribute to your sneakers LOL!  
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