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the days and nights |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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the days and the nights seem long. i want you here. but you are far from me. i wish i knew how you felt. the days and nights are long. how i long to kiss you. i want to feel your heart beat when you hug me. how i long to hear your voice say "i love you" the days and nights are long it won't be long till i'm.... kissing you, hugging you, being with you. i love you and, i know you love me to, forever we shall be together. -robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
*claps* reminds me of my "best friend" but plz dunt say names lol good work!   ps i put the ohboy thing on all of my stuff lol |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
so scott who wrote the poem hahahahahahha! you better not let tiff seee you using her squirts! robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
who DID write the poem missy?!?!?!? lol da..rn it i made like 10000 typos and i had to go back and correct them lol [This message has been edited by bOoGaSuGa (edited 08-11-2001).] |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
"Dreams last so long even after you're gone, I know that you love me and soon you will see, I was meant for you, and you were meant for me..." Your poem reminded me of that song. It's good. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this... Very sweet! I think you're improving a lot as a poet since you've come here. This is different from what I sometimes read from you, but I enjoyed it, and look forward to seeing more soon. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
umm ok thanks? well anyways....... lol i'm in a weird mood today so just do what javi does ignore whatever i say lol! robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey now, I don't ignore whatever you say. Only on friday's  hehe well done on the poem  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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