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Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-08-09 11:04 AM

Dear Justin:

When I first saw you,
I started to like you.
What caught me was your,
baby blue eyes.

You had talked sense into me,
To dump Josh.
Which I wanted to do,
But was scared of him.

You came to my house,
To ask me out.
I said yes,
But my mom don't know.

I had left for the weekend,
To come back and find out,
You got arestted.
That was sad for me.

I had all my friends,
Telling me what you were up to.
I believed them,
Until you told me the truth.

It was 2 1/2 weeks,
Since I saw you.
I saw you yesterday,
And fixed everything.

Now that summer is ending,
I want you even more.

With love 4-ever,
Sarah xoxo

It is about my boyfriend getting arestted and me having to deal wit hnot seeing him. And deal with lies about him cheating on me wit other girls. But everything is fixed and I think it made us stronger.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-09 11:34 AM

Nope, sorry. If my boyfriend cheated on me- there would be no fixing it. It would just be over. Simple as that. I will not come second to another girl. ANYWAY...hehe...On to the poem. I liked it. I thought you told the story well. Sorry to hear about all that, and I guess I'm glad things are ok now. Best of luck with you 2.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-08-09 04:16 PM

Hey,

    Um...Spice I don't think the guy cheated...she said

'It is about my boyfriend getting arestted and me having to deal wit hnot seeing him.  And deal with lies about him cheating on me wit other girls.  But everything is fixed and I think it made us stronger.'

Well back to the poem, I think its okay not your best but good never the less. Until your next poem

          -- Linc

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[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 08-09-2001).]

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

3 posted 2001-08-09 11:35 PM

Sometymes friends know best! my friends told me that my ex had been cheating on me with 4 girls...he denied it...who did i belive? my friends..I called his house and heard another girl in the backround...

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-10 12:10 PM

Wow... he went to jail? Listen to Tamma.. sometimes friends know best.

I hope things work out for the best. Nicely written poem. Nice vent of your feelings.. I enjoyed it

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

5 posted 2001-08-10 03:31 AM

Wow, gaol's pretty full on!

Sorry to hear about it.

Hope it has made you stronger!

Very sweet poem

ALLIE

Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

6 posted 2001-08-10 12:11 PM

Thanx you guys. But he wasn't cheating on me. My friends don't really like him so they wanted to break us up, by telling me lies about him. Even though I really like him. No he really didn't go to jail, he was picked up by the cops for running away. And was sent to boot camp for a week. But now I hope you understand the poem.

**Sarah

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

7 posted 2001-08-11 02:03 AM

great friends they seem. It's great that everything alright now.
nice poem

katie

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2001-08-12 04:30 PM

About friends knowing best.......

it depends on how good've friends they are. I had this girl tell me that my guy was going to dump and all this crap because she was still mad about the fact that one of her boyfriends dumped her for me.

It depends.

Anyways, about the poem, I liked it.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-09-01 03:17 AM

Well good luck with the whole thing and try not to getinto much trouble with this one. Good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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