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mon ami ideal |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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this is french...cuz i also write alot in french. umm the grammar and accents arent there sorry. hope you enjoy. ill translate it some day. Son visage bronze mais expressif me donne des regards intense ses yeux ronds mais vif s'arrrete son voyage sur mes leveres ses regards sont affecteux mais clair mes genoux tremble avec la tonneur de ma coeur et de la passion ses sourcils sont intelligents mais determines son nez et elegent et symmitrique son ouche sensuel se leve en un sourire gourmand mes yeux lui donnes des regardes invitation amoureuses son menton sculpte son voix me caresse commes ses mains grand et doux les cheveux chatain mais rebelle et brillant son taille d'une silhouette me donnes des frissonnes ses muscles son souple mais dur ma tete tournes avec to ces emotions ma corps frissons quand il me touche avec sa voix et son corps magique je le veut il me met a sourire je lui t'aime avec to mon couer. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dang it....I knew I should have learned French  I'd love to read the translation..... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Madamoiselle,  Quand j'ai lu ceci, je pensais à à quelle distance vous êtes venus dans votre écriture. Ca poem est une étape importante pour accentuer ce fait. Vous êtes un jeune auteur merveilleux et je vous souhaite le meilleur. Vôtre, Allan Blood Moon |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Okay, I take French, but, unfortunately, I'm only in my third year...  But if you get it translated, I would LOVE to read it!! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
I (like marie) take french in my 3rd year... so unfortunately i could only pick up a line here or there... however French is a beautiful langurage... and it read beautifuly! I'd love to hear the translation as well... ALLIE |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Merci Allan, j'etait vraiment heureuse avec ta response. merci mon cher ami. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Bon et bien, c'etait formidable! Moi, jsuis trop timide d'ecrire et montrer la poesie francaise, alors bravo! Maintenant ca ouvre beaucoup d'occasions je pense. Qd meme, bravo, c'etait tres bien fait, et je suis tres heureuse de voir une autre (des autres) francophones a cette siteweb! Sois certaine de continuer ta poesie...tu ecris tres tres bien! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that's great. I think it's great when all the poems aren't in English. I don't want to say anything though for fear of sounding more stupid than normal.  Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I know a little french! Not enough to understand this  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
If I knew french, I'd reply. I'm sure it's good though. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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