Boy So Lonely (repost from TP#4 and #1 of a 2-part 'series')

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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

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Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-08-09 03:18 AM

This is one that was in TP#4 that I just rediscovered in my "archives." lol Well, It was probably one of the best pieces I have written, so I decided I'd write a companion for it. Anyway, let me know what you think of this, and don't forget to read its companion, "Boy No Longer Lonely"

BOY SO LONELY

He's the kid that
You always pass by
He always seems to be sad
And you don't know why

He's the one that
Always feels so blue
Nobody ever bothers to say hi
The boy nobody ever knew

The one that nobody liked
Though they never even tried
Nobody was there to hold him
All those nights that he cried

He's the one that's in the corner
Trying to keep away from the crowd
He was only his own best friend
Close friends he was not endowed

The boy that noone likes
Has commited suicide...
Maybe if someone loved him
He may not have died

His mother and father
Visited him only
Soon their lives moved on
And he was left a boy so lonely

      - Cody -

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Linc

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1 posted 2001-08-09 04:05 PM

Hey,

Wow, this is a really nice piece sad though very sad. It’s a shame that some people have to go through childhoods and even there whole lives like that. Kind of describes the type of world we are trapped in doesn’t it. Well anyways this is a really nice poem and I am going to read the counterpart now so until your next poem

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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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2 posted 2001-08-09 11:44 PM

Aww... this is really sad. The emotions throughout this piece are very strong. I really enjoyed the way you wrote this, and the way the whole story played out. Nicely done, Cody! I really enjoued this.
On to #2!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-08-13 03:52 AM

Wow this poem is really sad but is so true because I'm sure htere is a person like the one you described in every school.Maybe next time people walk by someone like you described they will take a minute and at least say hi.But anyway I really like this poem and it made me think keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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4 posted 2001-09-03 03:00 AM

I really loved the poem here. Awesome job! Man this was just great.

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Jezziekaka
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since 2001-08-21

Posts 58
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5 posted 2001-09-05 08:16 PM

Wow! I think that alot of things could be prevented if every boy and girl got some love! I liked this alot!

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