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Daddy, Tell Me
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Daddy, Tell Me |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I thought I was your little girl Now that I’ve found him You’re treating me so different Like I’m not even your daughter I hold back the tears I want to cry I used to be “Daddy’s Little Girl” But it seems like you don’t want that Tell me, what’s so different now? You never treated me like this Before he came back into my life What is it about this one? He treats me great, I know that’s not it Daddy, tell me, is he taking me from you, Is that what this is all about? I didn’t act like this with the others Because he’s not like the rest Daddy, tell me what it is That’s causing you to treat me different now Daddy, I’ll always be your little girl Nothing in the world can change that But I’m growing up now its tyme to let me grow And let me be with him Daddy, I love him . . . ~*~ Tamma M. Offenstein ~*~ "A friend's shoulder makes a |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Gosh that's so sad but pretty...You can feel the pain...specially in that last sentence... aww man *pouts*  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, Tamma.. this is so sad. Good luck with this situation. hope your dad comes to his senses soon. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow looks like things aren't going too good at home. Well good luck with this Tamma. The poem was well expressed.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
omg girl! you hit so close to home for me when i read your stuff it's so hard for me to finish it but i did and now the tears that never wanted to come out have. thank you i feel a lot beeter. robin  i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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sean mani Junior Member
since 2001-08-06
Posts 27 |
i know this kind of seems weird...but i guess ur dad just wants to protect u...its normal for parents to seem over protective of their daughters... sean |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a brilliant piece, I found it very moving and it was a poem which I found very easy to relate to. I really loved it, I think its the first I've read of yours and so far I thin that you are a very verytalented poet. I really enjoyed this post. Hope to see more of your work soon.  ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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