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0 posted 2001-08-08 02:22 AM


ok i had to drag this one out of storage because the pick up lines have come to my attention again! i must warn you this may be shocking news!

"hey baby come here often?" is what i hear when i walk in the door.
why do guys use pick up line?
the smell of the cheesy colonge.
the ugly 4 piece suit.

Why do guys use pick up lines?
do you guys know they don't work?
"i'm lost take me home with you!" that's a new one.
you think you're spiffy.
you're not!

i like original.
"hi" wow! a guy who knows what i like!
i sit next to him keeping my fingers crossed.
"so do ya come here often?"
that's it!no more!

Lord I ask this one request.
a man you never uses pick up lines!
goodness! i'm going to scream.
Lord that's all i ask.

Robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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1 posted 2001-08-08 02:24 AM


good one lol *wont use a cheap pick up line just to piss you off this time  

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2 posted 2001-08-08 02:25 AM


ok scott glad to hear it! lol really it's not me you need to worry about lol!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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3 posted 2001-08-08 03:11 PM


You have a good point keep up the great work!
  Lauren

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4 posted 2001-08-08 05:20 PM


I gotcha on this one.
I remember this.
I don't need pickuplines....i'm too cute hehe jk

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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5 posted 2001-08-08 06:58 PM


we all know how hot you are dopey! hehe opps did i say that out loud?
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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6 posted 2001-08-08 07:37 PM


@ Dopes.  *pats shoulder* whatever you say, sweetie.

Anyways.. uh oh.. bringing this one out again?  Lets see if it gets as big a response as last time.  Heh.. I liked this   Cute!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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7 posted 2001-08-09 02:35 PM


guys use pick up lines cuz they want to try someway somehow to impress the gurls...however...i dont need to use words that aren't part of me to impress a gurl...a gurl should be impressed by a person's heart...(was that a pic up line?)

sean

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8 posted 2001-08-09 06:40 PM


sean you deserve an award!
robin

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9 posted 2001-08-10 12:01 PM


*bump*
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10 posted 2001-08-10 08:26 AM


HAHAHA I should have known this one would be up too   Very cute and I agree with your thoughts on pick up lines... my friends and I just think of the craziest cheesiest ones and just start like playin around with them. I think they can be funny when used jokingly. It makes the guys.. I dunno... more funny... more...flawed...lol...

Jenn

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11 posted 2001-08-10 09:15 AM


This was a very interesting poem, the first time I've read it and I thought it was very cool and oh so true!!  Keep it up!



^*~Kicking Kim~*^  

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12 posted 2001-08-11 02:07 AM


what is it with guys

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

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13 posted 2001-08-11 04:12 AM


hello!!!! guys are stupid no offense guys but ya are!!! but see we can't live without ya so it's actually a good thing.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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14 posted 2001-08-12 04:34 PM


I think pick up lines are hilarious.
The funniest one I've heard was "I lost my teddy bear, can I sleep with you?"
But still, it's stupid.  Personally, with me, if you want to ask me out, just walk up to me and start talking to me. Pick up lines are funny, but they're stupid and they don't work for me.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

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15 posted 2001-08-12 08:35 PM


pickup lines are hilarious when they arent directed at you....
funny poem.

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16 posted 2001-08-13 01:48 PM


Making that first connection is sometimes difficult.Let me ask you this.Why do girls dress like a whore and get upset when they don't get respect.

paladin

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17 posted 2001-08-13 01:55 PM


Let me ask you this.  Why do some guys call girls whores because they wear shorts that aren't to terribly short and tank tops?  In my old neighborhood, the guys would just be like "you are such a whore" and I was like "why do you say that?" and they could never give me a reason because I'm not a whore.  I know someone who refers to me as a ho on a regular basis, but I call him a redneck so It's really no biggie.  i don't know why girls dress trashy and then want respect, but I know why they wear short skirts and tube tops.  It's to get attention. Maybe they want you to respect them for their opinion and not for the way they dress.  I dunno. There's two sides to every story though.  For a while everyone thought the was I made my money was prostitution when really I mow lawns.  Just cuz I was carrying around about a hundred bucks everyday, they assumed I was a prostitute. You gotta ask questions to get answers, and sometimes set the record straight.  I dunno, I got a weird opinion about things.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

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18 posted 2001-08-14 05:46 PM


ok people no fighting ok! this is just supposed to be a humorus poem! so no more fighting!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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