I want my heart back......(not finished yet...work in progress! :)

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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-08-07 05:06 PM

So many lies keep coming my way
I keep geting lied to from day to day

My heart is fragile,but yet you didn't care
All of this anger makes me frustrated, it's just not fair

You told me things,That I belived
My trust you shatterd,my heart is decived

Deception is hard to face,it's hard to relize
You told me many things, but they were all lies
how could you kiss me and look in my eyes

another guy has played me, once again
I can't take these games of saying,"I love you" if its just pretend!

Can't you see what you did riped me apart
I can't take your games, and what you do to my heart

Inside me a feeling I hate to feel
I want to awake from this nightmare, please dont be real

Lies upon deception is all that runs through my mind
How could I have been so blind?
How can this world be so unkind?

I gave you my heart along with my soul
You took them without thinking, both you stole

I feel as though my insides are broken
My heart cannot mend,because of the harsh words spoken

I devoted myself intirely to you
But you took my heart,broke it right into two

I know I wouldn't do anything to bring you such pain
All these feelings inside they wont go away, they still remain

I asked you to tell me what's goin on?
How could you continue lieing for so long?

How could you think it's all fine?
I want my heart back, you stole it, it's mine

You tell me you love me and only me
You broke my heart,now how can this be?

I imaganied our future, and how it would turn out
Why did you say,"I love you." if you had a doubt

But still you went on lieing to your self
how could you say I love you and not anyone else?

I knew when I told you my 3 words of trust
It was all clear, it was love, not lust

Don't play with my heart, like it's a toy
but then I forget you are just a boy.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-07 05:23 PM

Oooo! I liked this one.
I loved these lines: "My trust you shatterd,my heart is decived
Deception is hard to face,it's hard to relize
You told me many things, but they were all lies
how could you kiss me and look in my eyes"
The last line was cool too. Had some attitude. I liked it. Very well done.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-08 01:44 AM

I liked the last line. It showed that you weren't going to give in to his foolish games. You go, girl! I really enjoyed this one... I can't wait to see the finished product

Keep us posted with the progress.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-08-08 01:57 AM

OH OH OH I LOVED THE LAST LINE! BOYS ARE SOOOOO UGH! THEY DON'T KNOW WHEN TO QUIT! I SHOULD TALK LOL! BUT IT WAS A GOOD READ.
ROBIN

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-08 04:30 PM

Well done here. Not all guys are like that, but oh well. You wrote this well. I liked the tone you wrote in too. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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