I love You ... Repost from open poetry 3...yeah ive been here that long :)

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Teen Poetry #5

I love You ... Repost from open poetry 3...yeah ive been here that long :)

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-08-05 01:53 PM

The words repeated in my head
I had been practicing for days
And yet these words could not be said
Lost among my hearts delays
The silence fell on both our ears
Why did you still seem so content
Struggling just to face my fears
It seemed like hours came and went
When somehow in your gazing eyes
Amiss my most unveiling hour
I felt an inner passion rise
And granted on myself the power
To tell you everything I felt
You smiled at me and brought me near
I kissed your lips and felt mine melt
As you whispered in my ear
Your softly spoken loving words
Were the sweetest sounding ever said
And ever since the day I heard
Your words repeated in my head
I love you

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-08-05 02:03 PM

This is really sweet. I hope you gave it to whoever you wrote it for. Thanks for reposting it.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-08-05 04:18 PM

Your poem is really sweet and whoever you wrote this for is really lucky.SO keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-05 05:17 PM

Wow, Kev... I really liked this one. The flow and rhyme was perfect... and the content was awesome. Sometimes it's so hard to say those three words, especially when you mean it the most. Nicely done! I really enjoyed it

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA