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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2001-08-04 11:23 PM

It almost slipped a couple times
Three words I almost said.
My heart and mouth were screaming YES!
But NO!! reverbed inside my head.
Feelings felt but never spoken
It pains me not to say
Those three words I wanted to
Just the other day.

this isn't one of my best poems...it was more or less a poem i wrote b/c i needed to get it out..and writing it down was much more preferable than talking to the people that were around at the time. The reason i'm posting it is b/c i wanted to show that there's more than the overly depressing crap i write more often than not...

this is one of my rare poems about something remotely happy...hope you guys enjoy it.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

1 posted 2001-08-04 11:55 PM

This was a very good poem!! And I know what you mean!!  I really liked it too cuz thats the way I always write my poems... I just have tons of feelings stored up inside.. so I just write them down...  But I liked this very much.. Hope to see more soon.
    Always,
      Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-05 01:16 AM

Always feels better after you write about it, huh?

Don't be afraid to tell someone you love them. Wouldn't you hate it if something happened, and you never got the chance to tell her you really loved her? Think about it...
I enjoyed this piece. It's a nice vent

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

3 posted 2001-08-05 04:43 AM

I would have to agree with Marie. I used to hold in how I feel about people..then I lost someone without ever telling them how much they honestly touched my life and I still regret it. Love is a beautiful thing...spread it around!!
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-08-05 10:38 PM

i realte...but, its like something holds you back...and the words doesnt seem to come out...i feel this one.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-05-2001).]

Postman Pat
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 23
The Great Land DownUnder

5 posted 2001-08-06 12:08 PM

Trust me. I feel like this EVERY day. Sometimes you know in your heart that you are in love with a person but you also know that telling that person the way you feel would do you wrong. I liked the poem.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-08-06 11:18 AM

HeHeHe- It's okay! We won't strap you in the Psycho 2000 because you wrote a happy poem.

I actually liked it. For some reason I always read your poems in a fast, low tone. It gives it a really nice flow. Anyway- ya, I know what ya mean here. Had those thoughts before. Nice write.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-08-08 01:21 AM

Great job here. It's always good to express yourself. Vent yourself......yep yep.
Anyhow, well done on this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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