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dastard Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 55in tearing silence |
I'm thinking about... about what? whatever I care about... about what? Does it matter? I'm dreaming of... of what? I can't remember I'm frightend to... to what? surrender I'm acting like... a what? pretender What's this about? May be my soul's dark chamber "Only two things are infinite; the universe and humans' stupidity, but I'm not sure yet about the universe." ~Albert Einstein [This message has been edited by dastard (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I feel like this sometimes  I think a good title could be simply "Whatever" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Indifferent maybe?? I liked this... I relate right now a whole lot. Jenn |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was really great! I thought this was really well expressed. I often feel like this. Well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"I'm frightend to... to what? surrender" *Sigh* Ya... Me too. Nice job, Dastard. ( LOL...I accidnelt typed something else instead of "dastard"... Glad I saw that. LOL) Hope to see another one soon. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL @ Spice.. haha! I really liked this one, dastard. I liked the format... very original. The style of the poem is unique. I'm no good at titles, but I would suggest maybe "Frightened". I enjoyed this, as always  Very nicely done!  --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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dastard Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 55in tearing silence |
Big thanks to you all for replying, I'm happy you liked that, it wouldn't have let me sleep if I didn't write it down as it suddenly was in my head when I was in my bed. But anyways, Spice... do you think I'm a damn b...? [*hits Dopey to prove his loyalty*] Marie... hey, I got 10 posts, time for a new poem, right? Thanks again "Only two things are infinite; the universe and humans' stupidity, but I'm not sure yet about the universe." ~Albert Einstein |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
...yes it IS time for another poem! i thought that the form was very original indeed..especially the way you ended it...it concluded the poem very nicely indeed ......awesome poem custard..deserves a pulitzer.. |
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dastard Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 55in tearing silence |
Okay... just to explain... Cherish got some fever and felt like bringin' all my stuff back up... I deny to be in charge for her actions... May this disaster have a quick end. BTW... thanks Cherish "Only two things are infinite; the universe and humans' stupidity, but I'm not sure yet about the universe." ~Albert Einstein |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
'skay sweetie  ...btw the fevers still raging....  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Glad I caught this one this time! Way to go dastard! Way to go Cherish!!! Yeah... Anyway, I like, I like! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OooooOOoooOOooooOOoooo I like this one a lot!!! Your format rocked....Bravissimo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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