can i handle this?(coll. poeticgirl01 & boogasuga)

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can i handle this?(coll. poeticgirl01 & boogasuga)

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-08-04 03:41 AM

i don't understand these questions you ask me
why all these suspisions?
i try to figure this puzzle called life out
but is it too complicated?
no don't go here, no don't do that
i here these words constantly
but still i do not understand
the thought of loneliness is Kafkaesque to me
everywhere i turn it's a pitiful sight
will this paranoya just go away?
or will haunt me till my dying day? please let me be go away!!
can i handle this.... pain

THE END

ROBIN & SCOTT

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

bOoGaSuGa
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since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

1 posted 2001-08-04 03:54 AM

hey did i authorize this? lol

bOoGaSuGa
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since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

2 posted 2001-08-04 03:56 AM

im just kiddin lol

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-08-04 03:57 AM

scott you silly duck you wrote it with me!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-04 01:06 PM

I thought you guys did fine.....nicely done here

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-05 12:37 PM

I like this one.. you both work well together! I enjoyed it.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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