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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-08-04 01:17 AM

Howdy!! I'm finally back from Oregon. It was a very fun trip, but I'm happy to be back. I actually wrote 2 good poems while I was there, but for now I'm just going to post this one. Anyway, I have a lot of catching up to do around here, so I better get back to that, let me now what you think of this one!

EVERY

Every other minute
I think about you
Wondering hat you're doing
And if you think of me too

Every single night
Dreaming, there you are
Wishing I could talk to you
And that you weren't so far

Each and every time
I see a star in the sky
I wish that I could see you
That I had wings to fly

In every single prayer
I pray God will keep you safe
You're doing what you love
And staying strong in your faith

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-04 03:48 AM

Cody-AWww..
A very sweet write...
The rhyming was a plus. The flow was terriffic as well.
Glad you had a good trip...hope to see the other poem soon.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-08-04 04:05 AM

good good good very tasty! taste like chicken! lol btw good poem.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

bOoGaSuGa
Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

3 posted 2001-08-04 04:22 AM

that was good i like the rhyme, its hard to make words rhyme lol

bOoGaSuGa
Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

4 posted 2001-08-04 04:24 AM

and the pitchfork thing was quite catchy too

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-08-04 04:55 AM

Very sweet...I liked it alot. Beautifully expressed...
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-04 01:09 PM

I thought this was great Cody. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-05 12:39 PM

Awww!! This is so sweet! I loved this... it really showed how much you care for her, that you wish she was closer, but you're just glad that she's happy because she's doing what she enjoys. Very sweet! I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

8 posted 2001-08-05 01:40 AM

This is so sweet... i really liked it

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