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~sugarpie313~
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0 posted 2001-08-03 09:42 PM



I don't know how to feel
Everyone else seems happy
But I'm not…
And I don't want to say that either.

My friends all have other things to do
That will occupy most of their time
But I don't…
And I will not tell them that either.

That might make them feel guilty
And they might change their plans
But they shouldn't…
And I don't want them to either.

I don't know whether I should be happy
Or if I should just act normal
But this won't matter…
And it especially wouldn't to them.


I don't know how to feel
But i know i should be greatful
And i am...
And i'll let everyone know that.


"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

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~sugarpie313~
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1 posted 2001-08-03 09:43 PM


please excuse my absense, i've had trouble writing... stuff i want to write about isn't really good material and i've been away camping a lot lately. so please accept this as a temporary piece while i work on something to make up for everything!  Thanks  


Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

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2 posted 2001-08-03 11:35 PM


Great poem. Sounds like you're going through a rough time. I'd just like to say that you don't have to apologize for not being here much, you're always well received. Mua! hehe
Be cool, and get well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Spice
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3 posted 2001-08-04 03:24 AM


Nice write Sugar.
I hope things get better for you.
Thats a rough situation ya got there.
Keep your chin up.  
Thanks for the read.

Shygirl82
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4 posted 2001-08-04 05:02 AM


Sounds like you have had some rough times thrown at ya.  Hope things get better..and remember...one day at a time...
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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5 posted 2001-08-05 12:24 PM


I'm sorry situations are tough right now.  I hope things start to get better... IM me if you ever need someone to talk to   This was a well written poem.  Thanks for sharing!  I hope you feel better.  Stay strong..

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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6 posted 2001-08-05 10:47 PM


such a hard situation...i hope your ok?...im me...if you need someone to talk, Val...my sn is..."sjlkajsklsjdklsaj"<---something like that...hahah...i cant even get my sn right?...imagine that...i think it would be better if youjust email me...well, keep your head up as i related to this...and nice to see one of your pieces.


[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-05-2001).]

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