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unanswered questions? (coll. with poeticgirl & boogasuga)
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unanswered questions? (coll. with poeticgirl & boogasuga) |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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boogasuga: sittin all up in my room poeticgirl01: with no one but myself to talk to boogasuga: when all of the sudden poeticgirl01:life hit me in the head boogasuga: i was thinking to myself poeticgirl01: why doesn't he come back for me? boogasuga: is there love still left poeticgirl01: does he even care that i'm hurting? boogasuga: or is he with someone else? poeticgirl01:i wish he was here with me holding me i fear to think the worse! boogasuga: is there cheating going on? poeticgirl01: or is it just me worring bout nothing, i wish i knew boogasuga: where do i find the answers? poeticgirl01: only love can tell boogasuga: and time. hey people this is a poem written with a good friend of mine! so please long respones are accepted lol! robin  i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
nice poem robin! lol |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tks scott lol i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
welcome robin lol did i reach 50 yet?!?!? lol |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought you guys did just fine on the collaboration. A future tip could be not to tell the people who wrote which line. Sometimes the mystery is a part of the fun. Well done though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Ahhh yes...unanswered questions, one of life's most annoying mysteries... I agree with Dopey. Sometimes its nice to figure out who wrote what. I kinda got lost when I read it though cuz i'd read the name, then the sentence, then the name, then the next sentence...very awkward, it was... But other than that, the poem was  . Good job.  -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Yes, I agree with ^... don't include who wrote what in the next collaboration. I liked this! You three worked well each other to create a very good poem. NIcely done --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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