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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Psyche may be your major But don't try to figure me out You could search my brain And never know what I'm about You can sit there and talk Until your face turns blue It doesn't matter what you say Nothing will get through I am just your guinea pig Let's not play pretend You'll try to break down my barrier Then whisper, "Let's be friends" All my secrets will have been divulged My wounds will be exposed I know all about these things That's the way love goes What do you mean Why do I act this way? You're the first one to question me Everyone else thinks I'm okay Sure, I have some friends A best friend? Well, no I guess that people try But I can't let them get too close Why? Because I'm not stupid I won't get hurt again Each time I try to love I always lose a "friend" So go ahead and try to read me Your conclusion will be this: I've been wronged in life And that's just the way it is So, let's not play any games Let me know if you're planning to stick around I will not be played for a fool I don't want to be let down Is it too much to ask For you to promise me That you will be my friend Throughout eternity? If my expectations are too high Or your intentions are too low Don't even try to be my friend Just turn around and go "Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now." |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wooohooo you go girl tell em how it is! robin  i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
This was great!! I loved the content and the way it flowed Excellent piece!! ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really thought this was cool. I can relate in many aspects. Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this was really cool. great job. i loved the flow.  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
People as a whole suck. They really do. But what you have to remember is that there are a few out there that actually make life worth living. Your piece is really heartfelt and I hope things look up for you soon. ~AF~ "Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea..eJ...people like me..haha. but,..umm..such bitterness in this piece..and thats what this world gives you..eh?...i feel you on this...great job, Sarah. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Sucky people make life worth living? hmmm...yeah, I guess I do make...uhh... Anywho: the poem. You did well on this one. You put some truth in here and made it rhyme, and the flow was great! Nice title too. Hope to see more from ya! -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. You told that person off.....nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I REALLY like this! You really told this person how it is. I'm guessing you're talking to a therapist? That's the impression I got, but then again, I may be wrong. If that's to a therapist I know EXACTLY what you're saying. I couldn't have said it better myself. Very nicely written.. the content is excellent, and the rhyme and flow is right on. Very well done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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