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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-04-03 06:44 PM



Above the stars,
And far beyond.
I was watching the stones,
Skipping across the pond.
And I thought of you….

You said to me,
If you could turn back time,
You take back all those heartbreaks,
And take our love back to its prime.
I thought of our love….

My world was shattered,
When you said you had to go.
I thought I’d never see you again,
The time went by oh so slow.
I thought of what we missed….

I didn’t know what happened,
Or what you had to go through.
But we could’ve gotten past it,
Cuz you know my love was true.
I thought of what we could’ve been…..

I don’t know how or when,
But I always hoped you come back soon.
As I looked up at the sun,
I saw it was high noon.
I thought of our summer days….

I knew my love would never die,
And I could never stop loving you.
The pain was too great,
To help ease it, I knew what I must do.
So I cried…

I cried a lonely river,
Of those hot pain-filled tears.
As I watched them hit the ground,
I looked back on those years.
I thought of our love we had together…

And I cried....

~Mi dayz r cold without u, but I'm hurtin while I'm with u, I Know mi heart can't take no more I keep on running back to u...~Ashanti

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2002-04-03 08:39 PM


omg! this was a greeeeeeeaaaaaaattttt poem! (like ttttony the tiger LoL) i weally liked it, cereally *LoL*!! Keep writing!! This is one of your best poems..I'm not sure who this is about..but I know it's someone who means a lot to you. Just tell me when you're ready! fok? lylas ~Jess

~*~Never take anything for granted~*~

See me?
Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93
UK
2 posted 2002-04-04 04:36 PM


And i cried, good title because i did this moved me so well written and it touched the nerve of my lost love i can really relate to this. I hope your pain is not too strong and I hope we can get through it with the love of God. E-mail me if you would like to talk. Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2002-04-05 06:36 AM


thank u 4 the replies, i appreciate everyone.

~Mi dayz r cold without u, but I'm hurtin while I'm with u, I Know mi heart can't take no more I keep on running back to u...~Ashanti

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