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sambot
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Brissy, Aust.

0 posted 2001-08-02 07:40 PM


Love is such a word
no poem could describe
To fly with a bird
the fish you could dive
But I will simply try
that's all I can do
For her pure love
the pure you
No money could buy
I can not lie
such a perfect dove
I am In Love


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Tamma
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1 posted 2001-08-02 10:25 PM


WELCOME to Passions! This was a wonderful first post, and i hope to see many more from you

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

Jessica
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2 posted 2001-08-02 11:11 PM


     WELCOME TO PIP!!!      
Shygirl82
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Ilinois
3 posted 2001-08-03 03:02 AM


Welcome to Passions!!!
This was a great post..its so good to hear about people acutually in love...Very sweet!
I am looking forward to reading more!
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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4 posted 2001-08-03 04:05 AM


Welcome to Passions!
I really thought that this was a good love poem. I enjoyed your first post and hope to see more!

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anonymousfemale
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5 posted 2001-08-04 08:17 AM


Welcome to Passions!!

Nice first post. Hope to see more.  

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Spice
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Resting in my cardboard box.
6 posted 2001-08-04 11:11 PM


   WELCOME TO PIP!  
(I'm late, I know- Shame on me.   )
Nice first post. I liked it alot. Inlove you say? Congrats. Best of luck. Hope to see you posting/replying bunches!  

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7 posted 2001-08-05 01:09 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry!  This is a very well written poem... someone's falling hard!!  Hehe.. I hope to see much more replies and posts from you in the future  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

MoeRocko
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West Virginia
8 posted 2001-08-06 03:45 AM


Alot of people in here hate me. But I liked this poem and welcome. RoCk On!

"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon
  

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9 posted 2001-08-08 03:38 AM


well moe maybe if you were nice to ppl they wouldn't hate you.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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