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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-08-02 12:49 PM


I wish someone who could walk
Their lives look so easy
As my life has so many challenges

Sometimes I think of being one of them
And how they can walk, run jump
I can only do so many

A person once told me
Tell people how I feel
Make them see what you see

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

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1 posted 2001-08-02 12:51 PM


short but sweet
interesting also

"I have no never-again, I have no always"
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2 posted 2001-08-02 02:16 PM


short...but filled with emotion.
It made me sad.
People take the simpelest things for grant-it.
Thanks for the reality check.  

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3 posted 2001-08-02 03:37 PM


no promblem
just think everyone

your in a wheelchair you have alot of pain, your younger sister can jump run while you sit in your chair. no one knows how you feel inside, and your heart is breaking now your in tears.
bye luvs, *-min-*

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

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4 posted 2001-08-03 06:23 PM


Great job here! I liked this one!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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5 posted 2001-08-03 06:42 PM


a message to learn from...and wise way of saying it, Minna.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

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6 posted 2001-08-04 07:17 PM


Short, but very powerful in its simplicity.  Very nicely written... It's very sad... *hugs*
Thanks for sharing this with us.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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