I don't want to let you go

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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-31 03:32 PM

I don't want to let you go
to turn around and say goodbye
to give up all we could have
to not even try.

I don't want to let you go
to loose the one I love
to let go of what I cling to
when I've got no one else.

I don't want to let you go
to not have you in my life
to give up all hope in us
without even trying to fight.

I don't want to let you go
to loose all that I love
to let them all win
I don't want to let you go.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-31 11:03 PM

I don't blame you for not wanting to let go- I wouldn't either.
A great write here, Allysa.
I liked it bunches.

Jessica

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-08-01 02:22 AM

Alyssa ~ I loved this poem and can relate to it so much. I have been in a relationship before that no one would or even try to understand. We loved each other very much but everyone thought because we had an age diffrence we weren't allowed to love each other. This poem portrayed my emotions perfectly... I loved it.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-08-01 02:23 AM

quite hearfelt...and full of emotions...i hope all goes well for you.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-03 03:49 AM

Well done here Allysa. I liked this one a lot! very heart felt and I don't blame you.....Oh and I don't think i'll be able to do the collaboration

I'm going off to college this week and have no time...sorriez.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-08-03 11:29 AM

I relate to this a lot. Saying good bye can sometimes suck...ok, it usually sucks. I hope things stay ok for you. Nice poem!

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-04 05:28 PM

I really like this, Allysa. These are hard feelings to work through. Good luck. *hugs* I hope you feel better. The poem is very well written. I really enjoyed this... I hope the situation turns out the way you want.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-08-29 02:16 PM

Allysa --- just don't give up if you think he's really worth all the trouble. I just wanna wish you a good luck. *hugs*

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