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cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2001-07-30 09:51 PM

Hello Everyone, I haven't been on in a while, I haven't written in a while either.. So I just wrote this one... And It's not the best but it's alright!! Talk to you all later bye bye

You know how they have that quote,
You will always have a feeling for that first love,
Well from my heart and my point of view,
Sad to say, but it's really true!

It's been about 8 months since I've seen him last,
I still think about him, dream about him, and even miss him
I don't know why, He played, used, and hurt me
The thing was, I loved him, it was not a two way street!

Well, things have kind of changed
I've got someone new,
I think he really likes me
He's different from what I'm used to
moves slow and is a little shy

It's been awhile,
I really like him,
But right now, I'm to afraid to fall in love again...
I would compare it to, doing something you are really not good at, and having people laugh at you,
all over again.
It's really hard!!

I think that I will try,
All that can happen is I just get laughed at,
But then again, maybe I will be the one laughing this time
Laughing about how it turned out
Laughing about how we turned out
Or how long we lasted...
I won't know tell I try!

            Thankyou for Reading
                Always,
                 Amanda  :)

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-30 10:32 PM

Hey, this one is great! I could never mess with a girl like that.

I hope this new guy treats you right! I liked the expression of this post! Groovay!

"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-31 12:40 PM

Hey Amanda!

I really liked this. Thought you showed your thoughtd very well. I'm sorry the first guy treated you badly...But don't hold it against the next one. Best of luck to you and your new relationship. Don't be afraid.

Thanks for the read.

thug-a-licious
Junior Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 27

3 posted 2001-07-31 01:35 AM

Wow this was really great! you express your feelings really well. I hope to see some more of your other poetry, and give this second guy a chance , like the old saying goes " it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all"!

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-07-31 03:45 AM

Once our hearts have been broken...it is hard to love again..I am facing the same issue and I know how difficult it is. All I can say is take one day at a time...and I hope things work out for you. Hope to see more of you 'round here!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

5 posted 2001-07-31 08:48 PM

Moe, Spice, Thug, Nikki
  Thankyou all for replying!!! I really appreciate it! I hope to stay on-line, and to keep writing...! And I really am trying to give this guy a chance... Like I said what is there to loose? Him?  Haha
           Thankyou,
              Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

anonymous albert ?