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chasing rain
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0 posted 2001-07-29 04:59 PM


Bites the wind
Cuts the heart
Held to kill
A work of art.
Bleed the wound
Taste the flow
Metal donned
Yet lying low.
To the point
No trigger seen
Hold it high
And watch it gleam...


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You know how it works...guess away!  

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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Kosetsu
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1 posted 2001-07-29 05:53 PM


I'm pretty sure I know this one. Is it a sword?

-Kosetsu

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

Jessica
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2 posted 2001-07-29 06:10 PM


^ I agree with my sweetie.   He seems to be the brains in this coulpe... LMAO!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!!  

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-29-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-07-29 06:22 PM


Yea....a sword or a dagger.
Spice
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4 posted 2001-07-29 07:11 PM


Damn you guys are good! HeHe- I can totally see where you guys would get that from as soon as you say it- but as far as me figuring it out on my own...I can't. =(
Another wonderful riddle, Leah. You got the style down wonderful for this stuff.  

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-29-2001).]

Kosetsu
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5 posted 2001-07-30 12:27 PM


Heh...Jesa, play fantasy roleplaying games from the time you're five, read fantasy books from the time you're eight, and write fantasy books by the time you're thirteen, and you start to recognize signs that point to a sword.

-Kosetsu

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

chasing rain
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6 posted 2001-08-01 04:20 PM


Dagger...but i guess sword would work too.  
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7 posted 2001-08-04 03:19 PM


Ahh! I totally got that when I was reading it!  I'm not completely dumb... hehe, this was cool, Leah.  Got my mind working.  Thanks for sharing!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

bOoGaSuGa
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8 posted 2001-08-04 04:55 PM


yay riddles are fun

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