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Teen Poetry #5

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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2001-07-28 12:04 PM

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Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-28 01:12 AM

A penguin you say??? HeHe

ANYWAY- I liked this. You captured your pain well. A wonderful free verse. The short lines worked well.

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-07-28 01:21 AM

I really liked this fear...

I can relate to this so much... Well done!!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

3 posted 2001-07-28 01:36 AM

This was a nice one Fear. I can relate to this one quite a bit as well. *stuffs it in his library* Keep up the good work!

-Kosetsu

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-07-28 01:41 AM

nicely done here fear...i felt part of the pain you must have felt when you wrote this as clear as crystal...good work..i hope things heal quickly

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
Smashing Pumkins

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

5 posted 2001-07-28 03:01 AM

Gees, thats a very moving poem...
However it's awful to hear you're in this situation...

So sorry,

ALLIE

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