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Neveah
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 5

0 posted 2001-07-27 08:27 PM

I know that sometimes
my words can be as hard as stone
and sometimes my words
have left you feeling all alone
so please forgive me
and hear the words im saying now
ill spend my whole life
looking for a way somehow
to let you know
just how precious you are to me
Ill use the best words I know
but i still wont say it all
b/c what I really want to say
is what the sun would say to the sky
for giving it a place to come alive
but my words get in the way...
of what I really want to say

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

1 posted 2001-07-28 12:06 PM

This is sweet Neveah. Welcome to PIP! This is the first I've read from you, and I like what I see. I'm adding this to my library. I can't wait to see some more of your stuff.

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

2 posted 2001-07-28 12:30 PM

Yes welcome to PIP, this was a good read...
but i have one ? for you..

Did u write that poem titled Forget? Posted by Kral..email me at JBaker515@hotmail.com if you did..ok if you didnt, email me anyway ok??
Thanks
Jeff

~Jeff~

"Smoking kills. If you're killed, you've lost a very important part of your life."
-Brooke Shields

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-28 01:15 AM

Alright- I like the beginning. The end sorta lost my interest...but the beginning half had my full attention. Loved it. Could relate bunches. Hope to see more soon.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-07-28 01:56 AM

for giving it a place to come alive

i loved that line..its beautiful....if words are eluding you at this moment i think you should just go ahead and show that person this poem...cus this says most of everything that person might want to hear..( does that makes sense? )...nice poem i enjoyed the reading of it very much thank you

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-29 03:20 AM

I thought this was fine. I enjoyed this a lot. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-03 11:49 PM

This was well written, Neveah! I really liked the beginning. The words are very sweet. Thanks for sharing this, and I can't wait to see more posts and replies from you.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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