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Raven Skye
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since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

0 posted 2001-07-27 11:41 AM

There's so many more people here!! AHH!! So much more poetry to read. I'll try commenting on everything...so many poems so little time...

I have kinda like a blind date thing tonite. I'm scared! I've only talked to this boy online. I know he went to my school, I looked him up in my yearbook. Ahh...this is crazy!!

Even though I've never met you
I feel like I know you
I don't know what to do.

Even though you don't know me
You drive me completely crazy
Because I think about you constantly.

Loving someone new is hard to start
But I'm ready to risk my heart
Hoping we'll never part.

Even though I want to hold you tight
It would take all my might
For another has my heart, it doesn't seem right.

Even though I still love him dearly
I still want you oh-so badly.
I can love you fearlessly.

God sent you down here to me
I'll cherish you forever, that you'll see
Hoping that you'll love me truly,
Even though you never met me...

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

1 posted 2001-07-27 11:53 AM

Cute poem, hope you have fun with Mr. Random.
Hopefully he is nice to you, and you 2 hit it off..
HAHA
have fun!!

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-27 01:50 PM

"Even though I want to hold you tight
It would take all my might
For another has my heart, it doesn't seem right."
I loved those lines. I know what you mean....
I liked this alot, Raven. Not my fav of yours form/style wise, but the message in it I loved. Hope all goes well on your date tonight.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-07-27 02:07 PM

A good poem. not your best. ut all the same good work. Hop eyou have fun on your lind date,

REgina

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-28 11:47 PM

Nice poem, Raven. This was posted a little while ago so obviously you had the date. I hope everything went alright. if it didn't, just pop over to teen chat where there is a hit list. You can add him there.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

5 posted 2001-07-29 12:24 PM

thats is good! hope everything went great with him!

katie

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-29 01:14 PM

I really liked this one Raven! This was completely awesome. You wrote an awesome poem here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-04 12:32 PM

Aww.. this is sweet! Nicely done! I know this is a little late

But I hope you had a great time! Good job on this poem. It was very well written.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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