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Valley of Fears#14(last one)1000th post!!!
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Valley of Fears#14(last one)1000th post!!! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Well I cant belive Im alive. And that I actually got to 1000th posts. Im suprised. Two ppl have gotten a sneak preview Acire who insipred me when he was talking about a poem and allan who helped with the first stanza. enjoy. These are alot of incidents with two different people all rolled into one. THE RAPE OF MY HEART With the fires blazing in the sky the green fire in my eyes seems to be ignisificant The passion I once felt for your body seems to have disappeared as I felt your infedlity rip me apart I stand naked in my room staring at my body in disgust The scars marking my arms hurt the bruises hurt The pain is welcome after the way you cleaved my heart I'm sorry I ever loved you I'm angry with the way you decided to use me your hands upon me brings disgust I live and I die in your arms ITs hard but its harder to not love you do we really stand a chance every option is destroyed are lives become caged our hearts are destroyed with the strain maybe I can say goodbye to you and forget out love? REgina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Regi - I feel very honored to be the first to reply to this. This poem had such passion to it. I can relate so much to this. This is my favorite from you so far. Just keep your head up; things will get better, I promise. I have been in your shoes and it isn't fun by far. You just have to let him know that you are better than that, even if you don't feel so at the time. If you ever need someone to talk to I'm here  I certainly hope things work out for you. BTW - Congrats! on your 1,000th post!!!  I can't wait 'till I see the day of mine!! What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful...and this ended the series VERY nicely...and its all done...already..  ...as i replyed to everyone ...i think...hehe...but i enjoyed this series a lot!...you did an amazing work from the first to the last...thanks for sharing it all...bye Ina  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
very powerful... i hope you can keep your head up and see through things. i think i missed #13 or did you skip 13? congrats on hitting your 1000th. great job on the series. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
I have to admit i skipped around with the series, but this one is gonna make me read all of them in order again. Good job and hope things do get so much better. Congrats "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Regi, wow. The series ended with a bang, and it was so good!! This was my favorite of yours in this series, as i have read all of them, and im sorry i didnt reply to all of them, its because i was away.. Anyway, you did superb. Congrats on 1000 too~!! ~Jeff~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty nice stuff. I really liked this one Regi! Awesome job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ITs hard but its harder to not love you regi you know i live your work..this is simply outstanding stuff..its in my library *click* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
  CONGRATULATIONS ON THE 1000TH POST!! Well done Regi on making it this far. Believe me, I know how tough it is to make it to 1000. You have written a wonderful piece to mark the occasion. It really brings the entire series together. This shows all the pain one last time and finishes it off yet leaving it open to thoughts and comments with the question mark. Thanks for this remarkable series, Regi. You have touched my heart and make me shudder so many times it was frightening. This is a good thing though. It forces me to look at the situation. Once again, thank you. You should be extremely proud of this. ~AF~ "Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
"Blood Moon" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Congrats on 1000, Regi!!! I am VERY impressed with this ending.. an AWESOME way to end the series. The ending to this poem blew me away... Very nicely done! I REALLY enjoyed this poem, and enjoyed the series even more. I hope I see more soon... --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm late at this but still, Congratulations at 1000 I feel speshul now that you've mentioned me  I'm glad I've given you alittle insiration, though I highly doubt it had much effect really. I can't even inspire myself now, and Ive been trying for months. I see so much pain in all your poems, and would love to finally see a poem that shows happiness even just once. I hope I do see the day that you do post that. Hope things are better for you. *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
WOW "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem very well written. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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