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Min Avathar: A riddle for you all. (whoa, that rhymed...)
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Min Avathar: A riddle for you all. (whoa, that rhymed...) |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
One moon to cast a glow One wind to brush them One sun for day to show To let the dark surround them. One force to anchor all One cloud to fade them One light to banish all And in the darkness call them. ===== Want to take a guess? I'll post the answer after...oh...5 replies. muaha. The title is in Elvish, so muaha again...MOO HA HA. *hits herself* *Tolkien influence -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
nice....very mysterious......whats the secret?? we love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
shadows? :P |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I want  |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
The |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
answer |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I can't think of the answer....this is hard! TELL! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Does it have something to do with Bards?? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interesting piece...nice and though-proking...i would say what i think it is...but you might say im "krazy" again..  ...hahah..well..TELL!...cuz its way pasted 5..ok..im done for now...bye Leah  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hmmm Kevin...Shadows...It does say that light banishes them. HMmmmmm  I give up. What is it? hahaha |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
A troll?????? I dunno!!!!! I'm with Jesa here - |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Hmm..this is gonna be an offchance guess..but crickets? maybe..dunno -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Or grass...wind moves the grass..roots anchor the grass..c'mon tell us! -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
i have no idea, i liked the read though... ALLIE |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
this was intersting.. cant say what you were getting at though, we are all wondering..so.......... SPILL YOUR GUTS to us.. ~Jeff~ |
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holatuwol Member
since 2001-04-27
Posts 72California, USA |
Tolkien influence... gee, that makes the entire poem relatively cryptic since JRR Tolkien, in my experience, was always full of strange surprises. ^_^ I still have to read a few more of his works, but definitely a good person to have influence you... and it showed. ^_^ The poem was short and to the point (short and to the point... not exactly my poetry strength... lol), and very mysterious... the rhymes were cute and fit the poem really well. ^_^ Nice job on this one... But you know, as for the answer to the riddle, I'm with Kevin. ^_^ The first thing that came to my mind was shadows... and there's no second thing that comes to mind, so, let us in on the secret of the poem's riddle, yes? ^_^v - holatuwol |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
my precioussssssssssss??????... leah=cow in hebrew hahahhahaa...i have no idea other then shadows...but thats about it dear leaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! ill be back for the answer! "I hope my mum and I hope my dad |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Are you guys ready for the answer yet? haha... I'm sucking on a nasty tasting lollipop, but other than that, the answer is... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
*kicks Leah* Spit it out, girly!  hehehehehe |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Awright, awright... Most of you guessed it. It's shadows. 'min avathar' is 'my shadows' in Elvish (and also the name of my site, but anywho...) and basically, the answer was there in front of you the whole time...  hehe. Kind of. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was really interesting, Leah. I really liked your explinations, because I was lost while reading. But after your responses, I went back and read it again, and I really liked what you came up with. Very interesting.. thanks for sharing this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Im just getting a brain freeze on one of the hints..."one light to banish them" How can shadows be banished by the light? pls explain hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
OK well I can honestly say I had no friggin' idea.  "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautifully written and mysterious...i liked it a lot good job! |
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