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Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2001-07-26 08:52 AM

This poem is to those who are soo confused by the oppsite sex it drives them CRAZY!!

My life is full of words I'll never understand,
Such as;
I love you,
I want to be with you,
Can we be just friends?

These words are so confusing,
Sentances so complex,
One minute it's: We're soulmates,
The next; I want this to end.

Why do we do this to ourselves,
Can't we see we're ripping each other apart?
Why can't we just say what we feel,
Or don't we know where to start??

Punk Angel

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

1 posted 2001-07-26 12:19 PM

i know this isnt all that great but my very close friend inspired me to write it!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-26 03:52 PM

I thought it was fine and it made sense, but it wasn't your best.
Anyhow, I agree...sometimes people just need to say what they truly feel and let go of these petty games.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

3 posted 2001-07-26 06:54 PM

dopey i agree with u, sum of us( hint hint angel) need 2 get rid of petty games and false actions, i know u al 2 well 2 say the least. and u know this.
~sabriel

stupidity should be painful
all i wanted out of u , was for sumthing u could never be, now take a real good look at what u've done 2 me!!!!!~slipknot

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-07-27 07:10 AM

ugh ugh.....men!!!..they are the MOST frustating creature to walk this earth!!!.....

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
Smashing Pumkins

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-07-27 02:24 PM

you know what "Can we be just friends?" that line really is horrible. but ya we all ought to just spit everything out!

Regina

ps Great poem!

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2001-07-27 02:30 PM

This was good...i enjoyed the read~

~Jeff~

"Smoking kills. If you're killed, you've lost a very important part of your life."
-Brooke Shields

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

7 posted 2001-07-28 03:57 PM

thanks all for replying, and staci, no ur not the one who inspired me to write it!! lol sorry, ur not my only close friend!! but u r one of my best friends!!

we love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
don't worry about the past, the future is far more important, unless you did something

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-08-03 12:00 PM

I think everyone can relate to this one. I really liked this... I liked the ending. This situation is all too familiar with me. Nicely done!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

9 posted 2001-08-03 12:49 PM

well, i really liked this one alot. great job kris.

~iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

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