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Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2001-07-25 11:09 PM

This is a poem I wrote about 10 min ago when i was thinking about an ex of mine, I hope you enjoy it.

You say it's not completely over,
That we can still be friends.
But deep inside I know now it's different,
That this is truely the end.

Now I feel that there is something missing,
Now there's a hole in my heart.
I love you so truely,
I don't know where to start.

You say that you've thought it over,
And you're sure this is where it ends.
I wish you'd realize that I'll love you forever,
But I can never be 'just friends'.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-07-25 11:16 PM

aww! i know how you feel

This is a great poem and welcome to passions. Hope to see more soon!

story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-25 11:24 PM

Awwww.... I hate that! I hope it never happens to me. It has before, Not good

Other than that, I Loved this one!

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

3 posted 2001-07-26 12:32 PM

I know how that feels it hurts so bad, when you hear you're song on the radio you cry. But that heart break ades slowly give it time and it will go away. This is a quote that I found
Maybe some people just aren't meant to be in our lives forever. Maybe some people are just passing through... it's like some people just come through our lives to bring us something: a gift, a blessing, a lesson we need to learn, and that's why they're here...you'll have that gift forever. Then he began to think of all the things

Forget the times that he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry, Forget the times he spoke your name, Remember now you're not the same, Forget the times he held your hand, Forget the sweet things if you can, Forget those times and don't pretend, You must remember he's just your friend. ---Unknown

~*~Min~*~

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

[This message has been edited by Ski*Chick (edited 07-26-2001).]

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-26 12:39 PM

Another nice write here.
I liked it.
The last line was my fav.
In some situations- It's just too hard to be friends. After you love someone so much...How can you be expected to stop? To hide all the feelings you were once able to show without shame.
Ya..Well. Thanks for the read.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-26-2001).]

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-07-26 03:54 AM

Yeah I have to agree...a crappy situation. I feel ya on this one. Knowing that the person doesnt feel the same about you...its hard just to be friends. This was a great write and thanks for sharing.
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

6 posted 2001-07-26 03:13 PM

thanks everyone, it means alot to me that u would take time to reply to this poems. its was one of my first and im glad u enjoyed it!!

we love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-26 03:44 PM

This sounds sad. I don't know if I could ever be just friends. It's something really hard to accomplish and it takes a great deal of maturity, and I don't think I have that much.
Anyhow, nice poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Sabriel.s.h.lover
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

8 posted 2001-07-26 06:43 PM

well well , my friend, u r in a very crappy situation. but, u'll get thro, haha, i know better than neone else dont i?
~sabriel

stupidity should be painful
all i wanted out of u , was for sumthing u could never be, now take a real good look at what u've done 2 me!!!!!~slipknot

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

9 posted 2001-07-27 04:04 AM

Hard situation... sorry to hear about it...

The middle stanza i didnt feel flowed as well... but that might just be me... great poem though ESPECIALLY THE END!

ALLIE

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

10 posted 2001-07-27 04:11 AM

the situation sux...but im sure a lot of us has felt this way at one point or another in their lives...good poem...i enjoye dit a lot.

~tears are what kiss this cheek at night~

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

11 posted 2001-07-27 04:11 AM

I know EXACTLY where you were coming from on this poem. My ex asked me to be "just friends" and I couldn't do it because I loved him too much. There was no way I could be with him and not hold his hand, or kiss him... I knew I couldn't hide my real feelings in front of him. When I told him that he said, "You must not really love me then"... I just said yes I do love you, too much, that's the problem, and walked away.
ANYWAY!!!
I loved the way you expressed this feeling here. Very nice job!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-27-2001).]

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

12 posted 2001-07-28 12:58 PM

It's hard but you'll learn to cope with it, Krista. In the end, you'll be better for it.
Good luck and thanks for the read.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

13 posted 2001-07-28 07:33 AM

i hate when people say that. hey it's a crappy stiuation don't worry the feeling will go away things will get better...just give it sometime.
katie

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

14 posted 2001-07-28 05:55 PM

A great one.. I know what that's like. And the one who said that to me doesn't even say hey to me anymore.. what a sad state I live in lol, but this is Great! Hope to see more!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

15 posted 2001-08-03 12:21 PM

I REALLY liked this... and connected with every word. This is very sad.. I'm sorry this happened. I know it's not easy. Stay strong

I enjoyed this.. thanks for sharing, Krista.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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